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On Bendis Needs
John Jakala, at his forum, asks what's so great about Brian Michael Bendis?

The thread is a follow-up to a blog entry where, in the comments section, we discover "Bendis just has too many writing tics that grate on my nerves whenever I try to read his superhero stuff: The inability to use contractions; the forced Tarantino-esque dialogue; the repetition -- dear lord, the repetition!" My reasons for buying Bendis, then, aren't likely to have much in the way of enlightenment, as I think the very things that draw me to Bendis' work are the things driving Jakala nutty. Am I going to let that stop me? Pshaw.

I first experienced Bendis through his work on Ultimate Spider-Man which, at the time, was all but fully collected in Marvel's free dotcomics offerings (I believe at the time something like the first 20 issues were all available online for free). I decided to give them a try, just to see what all the hubbub (both Bendis and Ultimate Spider-Man related) was about. The first issue was well-written enough to get me to the second (especially with the non-cost), and it was funny in plenty of places, but it wasn't until the issue where Peter reveals his identity to Mary Jane that I knew I'd be paying to read it.

The issue is, more or less, just one extended conversation between Peter and MJ in Peter's bedroom. No fights. No action. Barely a scene change. And when I got to the end of the issue, I realized I didn't care. What they were saying (and my anticipation of what they were going to say next) kept me going the whole time. What Jakala sees as forced dialogue read like real dialogue to me. Characters pause all over the place (side note: Ultimate Spider-Man also does wonders for underscoring Mark Bagley's ability to, as Fabian Nicieza once noted, infuse even the most motionless scenes with energy). And they repeat things--yes, because people repeat things. Especially when they're surprised, or confused, or just hopelessly pissed off, emotions that crop up in Peter Parker's life all the time. For me, at least, it works. It's funny. It has a rhythm that makes it easy to read.

I think Bendis does a great job of getting inside his characters' heads. Peter Parker isn't just a teenaged boy by exposition, he's a teenaged boy in word and deed (I mean, where else but in the mind of a fifteen year old boy does the thought occur to take down your big, nasty, underlord of crime by reading fat jokes off of notecards?).

Between USM and the Bendis-Oeming Powers, I've found, too, that I quite enjoy Bendis' ability to resolve stories in ways that both surprise me and seem completely obvious at the same time. His characters fight when they have to, but they prefer to think when they can. I prefer that, myself.

And if all that means that, occasionally, I get to see Spider-Man pantsing Dr. Octopus, I'm okay with that, too.

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From: (Anonymous) Date: November 20th, 2003 06:41 am (UTC) (wanna link?)
Hey! I never said "What's so great about Brian Michael Bendis?" Although that gets at the gist of what I'm wondering, it might also sound dismissive or confrontational read the wrong way.

But I do appreciate your attempt to explicate your enjoyment of Bendis' work. I think it's the most thorough--and convincing--defense I've read. It's interesting to think that what turns me off in Bendis' writing draws you in. I don't think this makes either of us "right" or "wrong" but it does serve as a useful illustration of how different tastes can shape one's opinions. Whereas Bendis' rhythms make his writing easy to read for you, they just remind me that I'm reading a comic written by Bendis and I can never become immersed in the story. I feel like the writing (esp. the dialogue) is too self-aware for me to ever lose awareness of the fact that I'm reading a comic (if that makes any sense).

I read a lot of the USM issues online, too, but I don't remember reading the one where he revealed his identity to MJ. I do remember many others pointing to that issue as one of their favorite recent comics. I'd like to say I'd check it out, but I'm not sure how to get my hands on a copy cheaply or easily.

- John Jakala
jkason From: [info]jkason Date: November 20th, 2003 02:52 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Sorry about the attitude in the paraphrasing; it was mostly for effect, but I certainly shouldn't have made it look like a direct quote. I've taken the quotation marks off "what's so great..." in the original post, let me know if you think it still looks like I'm quoting you.

I do understand your points about jarringly self-aware dialogue. I've run across it plenty of times, myself; in those cases, I find the in-joke sticks out noticeably, something that's especially annoying when the writing makes it plain I'm reading an in-joke, but I don't have the context to understand it. Makes me feel left out. I tend to think Bendis is good for smoothing over such things (so people who don't have the background won't know they're missing something), but I can see how others might not think so.

As for the Peter / MJ reveal issue, I'm sure it's in one of the USM collections. While I expect you don't want to plop down the money for a whole collection just to read a single issue, I wonder if the local library might carry some of those trades? I know libraries are getting better about that sort of thing. That's where my friend Laura first ran across Promethea, for example (then hooked me on it too, dammit).
From: (Anonymous) Date: November 20th, 2003 03:32 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Jason -

Thanks for taking out the quotes. I think that's fine. I suppose I have to expect taking some licks after making a joke at Bendis' expense, after all. ;)

Good idea on checking the library. I always forget to do that. It would probably help me save money if I'd try to sample stuff there first.

Carrie -

I have JINX but haven't read it yet. Maybe if I enjoy that I'll try out more of his crime work. I did enjoy FORTUNE & GLORY. It's just his superhero stuff I can't stand.

- John Jakala
dealio From: [info]dealio Date: November 20th, 2003 05:07 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Unfortunately if you want to look for Comic Books in the Library, you still have to go over to the Young Adult Section.
stotangirl From: [info]stotangirl Date: November 20th, 2003 10:13 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Well, in our local library you do, mostly. Though I found Promethea in the new books for adults section (new adult books?). But most of the other comics are in the YA section. So check both. :)
From: (Anonymous) Date: November 21st, 2003 07:02 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Thank your lucky stars for YA sections. Trust me, getting Adult Services librarians to order graphic novels is like pulling teeth. it ook me enarly a decade to get our adult services librarian to the point where she would buy them. And even still she considers them some lesser creature that takes money that could be better spent elsewhere. Our YA librarian, tho, has no problem ordering stuff.

So go to the YA section. Trust me, none of the library workers are going to laugh at you for it.

We're too busy laughing at your clothes....

Chad
From: (Anonymous) Date: November 20th, 2003 01:47 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Early Bendis stuff is the bestest. See if you can find Torso or Goldfish. Good stuff. Creepy crime stuff.

-Carrie
jkason From: [info]jkason Date: November 20th, 2003 02:54 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
Pop actually has a couple of those graphic novels. I just haven't had the spare money to plop down on them just yet. Good to hear recommendations, though; I always worry that I'll track down early work from a creator I like only to find it's not particularly good.
dealio From: [info]dealio Date: November 20th, 2003 05:11 pm (UTC) (wanna link?)
I just read the Interview on Newsrama with BMB concerning his "Secret War' title. He actually used the term, "douche chill bad". From here I'm going to read his comics and not his interviews. I hate when that happens.
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